Thursday, January 3, 2008

BLOSSOM


I have a neighbour of mine,
A wonderful flower…..named Blossom.
She is so beautifully fine,
That I cant hold my eyes often.

Planted beside me,
Just a year ago,
And I pray to Him,
Never away does she go.

She is just the way,
As she was then,
As bright and free with colour,
As she has always been.

Our likes do always match,
But our lines we do not catch,
Yet still we remain attached,
As we possess a key to the latch,
And here, Confusion plays the PERFECT patch.

Friends as great we've ever been,
Days of sorrow and happiness we've together seen,
To each other we are so free,
As ago and ever we'll always be,
In happiness, sadness, gloom & glee.

She loves to learn,
She loves to play.
Living life,
As it comes and goes away.

Many a times winds blow,
Bending us apart and pushing away,
But she's strong to endure,
And keeps the fall at a distant bay.

We know we love,
The way we confuse.
Yet with lots of affection ,
Are Our hearts profuse.


Deeply do I thank HIM,
Who brought to me such a friend,
Do I also wish,
Ever in life, does she never bend.

Sometimes I feel that she too likes me,
The way she smiles and expresses to me,
But still am unsure,
If she actually likes me,
May be she awaits first initiative by me.

For confession of my love,
Courage I hardly need,
For our friendship's close and strong,
Enough to make us feel.

I can let her know,
I don't even fear if away from me will she go,
For smart and practical is she much and so,
That won't she leave this friend,
For the love to her I show.

We are way ahead closer,
Beyond as much we could have been as lover.
But the excitement of and in love,
From everything stays far above.

But do I also think,
That if further do we go,
Then what would happen to our link
For eagerness & misunderstandings in us will in future never show.

Of her likeness am "quite" unsure,
Of her friendly fondness am damn sure.
Should I tell her,
Or should I wait for her,
The answer to all I can't procure.
But amongst it all, it's all for sure,
My affection for her I can't endure.

Yet still doesn't matter to me,
Who first comes to confess,
Only that matters to me,
Is that I like this princess.

But still I wish,
If she comes to tell.
As always do I wish,
That the sweety for whom I fell,
Has the unconventional sweetness,
Unlike others who wait for their guys to confess.

How badly do I wait for her,
Waiting to see those sweet smiles she wears,
Is something that I will never,
Let it show to her.

Yet together we are so close,
We are so good.
We talk as if,
Never again we would.

When turns to me does she,
We talk and not just speak,
Such is our friendship,
That I know would never go weak.

Her attitude deserves a big applause,
For the fragrance she spreads without a clause.

With me she loves playin possum,
With support and warmth is filled her bosom,
And this beautiful flower is nothing but…..awesome,
She is my sweet li'l blossom...................

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

hey!!!!!.......now i am writin dis fer a poet who(i am sure) will give loads to da muzic area by being a composer!!!!
da poem'z excellent, fabulous, creative.....
actually whatever i say.......itz less fer da poem!

Anonymous said...

hi bhai...it is gr8!!! u certainly have a romantic heart...:D

Unknown said...

alright 1st cmmnt finally...i liked d way u presented ur feelings 4 her. especially d para of "latch nd patch".. bt cudn make out one thing is it love or friendship or friendship turned to love..bt on d whole very good!!!! so keep writing mre romantic ones :)

Anonymous said...

Nice one dear......may your little blossom spreads all her/its fragnance across your world ever and ever and ever...............and believe me tell your inpiration whts her/its importance in your life.....this is one you;ll be happy with....dont lose it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...............
Peeyush

Anonymous said...

i m in all praises 4 ur composition... grt wrk..keep it up...
hope u dnt mind if i borrow these, 2 make -

A wonderful flower…..named Blossom.
So beautifully fine,
That I cant hold my eyes often:
To see those sweet smiles she wears.

Our likes not always match,
But Confusion plays the PERFECT patch.

Many a times winds blow,
Bending us apart and pushing away,
But she's strong to endure,
And keeps the fall at a distant bay.

We talk and not just speak,
Such is our love,
That I know would never go weak.

With support and warmth,
This beautiful flower is nothing but…..awesome,
She is my sweet li'l blossom...................



;) will b puting it 2 test ,, m sure wll do wndrs.. nd dnt u wrry i wnt take the credit...

Anonymous said...

hey!!!!!!!! bhai it is AWESOME..............ITS 2 gud,lovely,fantastic,marvellous...its simply outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!!i don't have words to describe this!!!!!

Anonymous said...

WOW!!!!!!!!
it wz extravagant....though u wud feel dat itz ironical...dat i m describing it in such a way....bt i wud still say dat itz outrageous........i hv nvr seen such a lovely poem evr....i swear by god...dat i hv nvr evr been impressed by ny poet lyk d way i hv been by u..........ur poem really refreshed ma mind...though itz nt 4 me...bt i still felt as if d guy z xpressin hiz feelings 4 me...it gave peace of mind...i wish dat i 2 had such an incredible power...2 xpress ma luv..........bt u r lucky...u r a special kid...whom god blessed by such strength.....i feel dat imust hv done sm gud deeds in ma previous birth...coz f vich...i got u in ma frenz list...on orkut....i wish...dat i"ll nvr evr nvr loose ma contact wid such a talented guy lyk u........

Unknown said...

if i say it was nice..ul say dat im lieing..but den it was really gud as i noe it was straight 4m ur heart..sply dat confusion n confess part..but den didnt really like dat fear portion..i do wish i had sum1 like u who cud rite 1 4 me but yaar bhai nikle...nyways keep writing..cya

Anonymous said...

hey am simply impressd..!!
i jus cant tell...amean..wordz cant simply express..!!
amazing...poem..!!
keep it up...!!
akansha

Unknown said...

hey am simply impressd...!!
amean...am amazed to c..dat u r such a gr8 poet...!!
keep it up..!!
akansha shrimal

Anonymous said...

hey...i found dis poem to b the bzt...!!itz awesum...!
keep it up...bro..!
kriti

Anonymous said...

hii.
am absolutely speechless aftr reading ths 1..nd 2 b true.. i fall short of words 4 ur amazing work..!!
juss wanna say tht keep writing such poems..n ya 1 thng mre.. do let ur inspiration knw bout it(whuevr she is)..!!
tke cre..!

Unknown said...

woow..amazingly penned dwn words ya..!!!straight 4m d heart..by d way...whos d "blossom" its dedciated toh huh???? :P u shud reveal ur inspiration na!!

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