Monday, October 8, 2007

Its all in the BLOOD

I think I had it in me,

I believe I’ll have it in me,

The thing that now lacks in me,

The ability to fly free.




T’was the time I didn’t know,

May be coz they didn’t wanted it to show,

But, actually, themselves don’t they know,

The art of – “TO LET GO”.




They count the meanest li’l one,

And feel that’s done,

It’s all the way they want it,

Afterall, it’s the way they learnt it.




Experience comes with age, ( mind you – it isn’t always)

And right is the sage,

Correct is their thought,

And tis’ here they fall short,

Of rational to their thought.




Around me too, they tried a knot,

But I fought and didn’t get caught,

I don’t like them,

In my life, I don’t entertain them.



I don’t say they don’t have to,

But why do I have to be bound to?




Change do they deny,

Its consequences they haven’t seen.

And when beggars die,

No comets are seen.




Dignity is they count,

And forbidden is the lounge,

Always do they frown,

Vent out like clown,

And that…….lets me down.




I do now know,

What they want of me.

Yet I don’t know,

If they’ll let me be,

What I always had in me.




Repugnant as they have grown,

And in the minds they’ve sown,

What they have’nt known,

Is to extinction are they prone.




If they ever read this, ( I wish they do)

They would be – “He wrote this!?!?!?!?!”,

But for them tis an absolute fit,

For they refuse their guilt.




My life’s now shaping,

Towards the goals its heading,

Which is now ticking,

And they’re none to intrude in!!!



I don’t care what they think,

And no way will I spare them a blink.




I possess the “weapon of choice”,

And I’ll raise my “VOICE…..”.

10 comments:

Shubhangi Kothari said...

hey.....its fantastic and real..i loved it..didn't know u write such beautiful poems....i m surprised but i'll love to read more of ur poems....keep it up!!!

Unknown said...

hey...its awesome!!!!

Unknown said...

Awesome in itZZ own way
kant find one single wrd in praise of itt....!!

Rush said...

oye Divya... u blew me away! but the smell of revolt is somewhat unsettling to me! nonetheless, great job in bringing out the core of yr heart thru words- KUDOS!!

jc said...

hey divya i hve read ur poems earlier also n i know that u are very good poem writer
the words come together wen u seriously go into ur heart n see whether the feelings lying there can become reality in form of words
n after seein n reading ur work i must say u r very human from inside
so keep the good work
n ya i want some happy poems also next time

Anonymous said...

hey its beautiful...... fantastic....... awesome..... i have no word 2 explain my feelings.

DivyaDS said...

seriously man!
u really have a point in it...
it's cool!

Anonymous said...

bro ur toooooooooo good ,awesome poem........ur really a gr8 pet bro im saying this frm my heart u really are :)

Sonam said...

ok, divya, this is a great poem!!

the line ''he wrote this'' is exactly what i felt when i read this for the first time!!

i never knew you were so good at this!! but now that i know i'll be looking forward to your next ones!!

though i felt a lil something while reading the poem!! it's clear you've written it for yourself but at some point some lines seem to deviate from the main topic n i can't place them how they figure in!!

but overall a fantastic poem!!!

Anonymous said...

hey divya..as i said earlier.. u hve tht capability of expanding ur thoughts 2 a gr8 extent..nd showcase thm ol vry well..
d same is 1nc again clear in ths poem of urs..
truly liked it..!
good wrk..!! :-)

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